Song "You"
Without you I am no one at all
I have all those amazing memories I can so easily recall
I never knew that I could love someone so much
I never met the person with such
Amazing eyes, hair, personality.

She shines like the brightest star
Now I will pick up guitar
And sing you the song about
How my life would be crap without
You

What could say more about you?
Amazing, fantastic, beatiful, you already know all that.
You love me that seems so untrue
I am in the dream. We both sat
At the table, looking into each other eyes.

She shines like the brightest star
Now I will pick up guitar
And sing you the song about
How my life would be crap without
You

I opened my eyes
You had taken over my mind
You were the biggest prize
In my life. And my mind signed
A contract to love you forever

She shines like the brightest star
Now I will pick up guitar
And sing you the song about
How my life would be crap without
You

How much I love you
No words can explain that.
I just want to make you smile,
Just see your beatiful smile, yeah...

She shines like the brightest star
Now I will pick up guitar
And sing you the song about
How my life would be crap without
You

Just give me the last kiss,
Last hug
And last laugh.
Let me last time look into your amazing eyes, yeah ...



Comments:
 
Rusty   Rusty wrote
on 6/19/2011 5:47:30 AM
I would so sing this lol. Epic song brother, keep up all the great work :)

rbouncha   rbouncha wrote
on 6/5/2011 3:51:42 PM
In my opinion it seems like this song is geared towards obsession then really about love. Just because that one line of the lyrics that reads "How my life would be crap without You", i think that song praise needs to be rework a little. Also you can disagree or agree with me but if you want more viewer try to post more hidden message to a song then really directing a story about a girl then that would a great song to listen too. By that i mean describing your adventure or past history how you review a society and trend that reminiscent a good memory about the objective of the song.

Naomi   Naomi wrote
on 5/27/2011 7:36:54 PM
Love this, I bet the melody on it would be wonderful.

DaveDaweed
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Synopsis
This is my song I wrote few months ago and I can off like it, its not the best, but I don't think is too bad either. Is about a perfect girl, amazing girl that I met in my life. I will really like to have people views on it as I want to connect my future job to writing.
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