Song "Untitled" (not finished)
I look into her eyes
All world fades away
And something inside me dies
God doesn't listen to my cries
After all the tries
Some people said I am unwise
People are like swarm of flies
Not welcomed when we want to be alone, yeah

I kiss her
All the problems fade away
What words I will say
For goodbye, what will be the last thing I will say
I don't want us to end, I want you to stay
Without you nothing will be okay
All I want is to delay
Delay the moment when you will need to go, yeah

I hold her hand
All people seem to fade away
But all the time we try to be alone
We are at home
Trying to think of some place where we won't moan
That people are there, but there is no where private we can go, yeah

I hugged her
My mind faded away

(not finished)

Comments:
 
rbouncha   rbouncha wrote
on 6/5/2011 2:14:57 AM
Sounds a bit cliche for a song don't you think? Or maybe that is your intent of purpose in writing that way because of the unfinished song perhaps? Now that i think about it maybe that was your intentions all along in making the audience to believe that way? Anyways a song is a song so whatever lyrics you come up with it's your idea.

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Synopsis
In my opinion is the best song I did write yet. It have that "spark" and it was written while feeling all those emotions that you can hopefully feel when reading this song.
A Word from the Writer
This song is simply about girl, how she and him needed to hide from people to be together.
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