Untitled #14 (2012)
...Even till,
...Now...
-That I'm pretty much over it,
Or as over it as I can be for now,
...And then later on...
It'll hurt a little less with time...
...But...
I still find myself comparing you to other guys,
Always in your favor,
They never add up,
-You're always the better looking,
Always the most interesting person in the room.
-Because you are you,
And you are wonderful.
...The only person that has been able to stand up to you,
-Even a little...
In the comparison that takes place in my mind...
Has been him;
My latest source of mild curiosity.
-Something about him,
The way he holds himself,
And conducts himself...
He is not you at all,
Nor could he ever replace you,
Never,
Never...
-But he is still good,
He passes the test,
Whatever "the test" might be,
Even back in school,
He had the same effect then as he has on me now;
Curiosity,
Sometimes great,
Sometimes mild...
But an ample distraction nonetheless.
I want to know him better,
And maybe something will happen,
Maybe not,
-What the hell,
It's amusing to me all the same...
Fools rush in...
But not this time.
-Hopefully.

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Emo, angsty gothic love stories, mostly some kind of poetry. A passion I didn't know I had until I was about 21. Something that I have been doing mostly consistently ever since. My pen name is Belasrose, my online name is Caerid Lock.
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