Commentary (2012)
Listen carefully,
Listen closely now dear,
Can you hear it in the distance?
Soft,
Like something playing in the back of your mind,
...White noise....
-Just shy of imperceptible,
Barely even there...
You know it well,
That mournful sound,
Of something like 10,000 tears.
Tears that were shed because your heart it hurts,
Tears shed because dammit I loved you,
...Tears that were there because I think I knew all along;
-But I couldn't stop myself from loving you all the same...
In any case,
I still wouldn't have had it any other way,
Because loving you has made me so much stronger,
Loving you made me a better person;
Loving you like I did brought me closer to you in the end...
Your friendship is the best reward,
I wouldn't trade it for the world.
The year that I spent in your presence,
Whist trying to overcome my own personal demons and feelings;
Has by far been one of the best years I've had in a long long time.
-So I'll raise a glass,
To me,
To you,
To many long years of friendship ahead of us,
And the wonderful year of friendship we've already had.
Please my dear dear friend,
Stay by my side,
And I'll do the same.

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Emo, angsty gothic love stories, mostly some kind of poetry. A passion I didn't know I had until I was about 21. Something that I have been doing mostly consistently ever since. My pen name is Belasrose, my online name is Caerid Lock.
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