WHAT"S LEFTY
  




Stiff old smelly sweat socks, left in the hallway.

Big old heavy size of elevens, left in the kitchen.
 
And a clumsy old, silly warm grin, left with a hug.

How our dearest memories are too soon forgotten.

 

Comments:
 
Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 12/28/2008 3:08:25 PM
I am digging this Haiku. Love the personification in the piece.

Roane242   Roane242 wrote
on 12/17/2008 4:16:32 PM
Your poem definitely captures the spirit of haiku, if not the letter. It's evocative.

penname   penname wrote
on 10/16/2008 8:07:11 PM
love the title and the imagery the end was a suprise- great work.

G_Money   G_Money wrote
on 10/16/2008 6:57:05 PM
Happy belated birthday to him :)

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