Pride

just one question
before i go
pride in fact
has stole the show
it gives to me
false sense of good
accomplish nothing
but think i could
take away
joy from others
credit me
because we're brothers
feeling special
when i wake
proud of me
even though it's fake


Comments:
 
penname   penname wrote
on 1/19/2009 5:48:19 PM
pride takes up two seats. i really enjoyed this sharp short piece

SapphireCat   SapphireCat wrote
on 1/18/2009 11:00:55 AM
I really liked this. Great job! ;)

Voice_of_a_Dreamer   Voice_of_a_Dreamer wrote
on 1/18/2009 8:02:35 AM
Pride is a razor wire. We have to have a little to give ourselves hope and self worth, but too much, and... Well you captured that perfectly. I can totally relate.

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