A "Dirty Napkin"
  


A well-fastened knot,

dusty, bumpy country road,

and cramped stuffy trunk.


...almost time for a "dirt nap" 


Comments:
 
Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 1/16/2009 7:03:45 AM
wonderful write my friend. So many things residing in these lines. Great job.

Roane242   Roane242 wrote
on 12/17/2008 4:14:26 PM
Very nice. The diction brings a very tactile sense that plays off the poem's hidden meaning. Or not so hidden meaning. I dig it! So to speak.

penname   penname wrote
on 11/18/2008 3:53:30 AM
brilliant on so many levels

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It's not a dirty old napkin, it's a plain old dirt nap!
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