tormented
im tormented by the love i found in you
i just wish you could see that i love you too.
i want you to know i see the truth
i dont only speak but will shout it out to the universe
theres nothing you could do to make me feel worse
i cant help but feel this way
everytime i see you
you make my day
so only one last thing to say
i hope you will always stay

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Bronkerz   Bronkerz wrote
on 5/18/2012 7:51:17 PM
thanks:)

Naomi   Naomi wrote
on 1/6/2011 11:03:15 AM
I like this!!! Well done :)

Darksabre   Darksabre wrote
on 1/5/2011 6:39:48 AM
Very well done!! :) Deep emotions, yet a glimmer of hope in in there too! Keep it up!! :D

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