Tuesday Through Thursday Lover
I was your Tuesday through Thursday lover
good just 'till the weekend comes
then your off again, running for cover
and I'm left here alone and feeling so damn dumb
You think it doesn't hurt
tell me again that it shouldn't matter
that when you go out, it's not to flirt
but now those three little words make me feel so much sadder
Tuesday 'cause you need at least a day to heal
those busy weekends are so very hard on you
I told you long aog, I need a love for me that's real
and it's not always what you (don't) say, but also what you (don't) do
You think it shouldn't be such a big thing
but that's cause it hurts me and not you
'cause we have no paper, and you don't wear my ring
and now I guess that you had enough-cause I haven't heard from you

-but then it's only Monday

Comments:
 
Bluez   Bluez wrote
on 6/4/2009 8:11:01 AM
Thank you Shadowof, for your comments and thoughts on my work, I agree, and I think we all spend our lives looking for that, and sometimes when we find it we still don't see it. Sometimes we get so lost in the searching that we can't accept the "finding" of it. I read your profile and I am the opposit of you in some areas, so if it's cool with you, we can agree to disagree on that and maybe still remain friends? I think we have to look at things from our own perspective, make up our minds as to what is real, what's important and what we believe, and just because we see "the elephant" from our own perspective doesn't mean either of us is wrong. I am not sure if that makes any sense at all, I am a drummer and don't always get any sleep. Thanks again for your thoughts.

Shadowofsatan666   Shadowofsatan666 wrote
on 6/4/2009 3:41:14 AM
As we all spend our lives, looking for happiness, looking for true love. The few people, the ones with there imature games, continue to lead us in to the abyss. until they come back around, fool us again, and bring us right back down. Even though this is coming from third person, you did a wonderful job to make it your own. Great work

Bluez   Bluez wrote
on 6/2/2009 2:39:52 AM
Thank you both for your thoughts and comments, There IS nothing like the real...and I am so fortunate to have real friends like you.

WAN   WAN wrote
on 6/2/2009 1:32:28 AM
So SAD SO BLUEEEEEEEE

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 6/1/2009 11:51:21 PM
Well done Bluez! How many of us you speak for here. There is nothing like the real thing,as the old song goes and that is so true here. Rock on!!!!

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Something that came to me as I was listening to some guys complain about their love lives...I had no comment cause I have no love life worth talking about, so I borrowed from them.
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