Forever Girl
 

FOREVER GIRL

 

 

Forever Girl

You made a love-promise to me

I’ll stake my claim, my flags unfurled

You give so much just to please

Now I live for your love

Ain’t nothing else working for me

I say my thanks to the angels of love

For bringing your heart only to me

What did I do, how did I ever live

Before your sweet love in my heart

You never take much Baby, but only give and then give

And we somehow found each other from so far apart

Not a day goes by, when I’m not thinking of you

And wishing that you my love were right here

I can close my eyes and still picture you

Because long ago, you gave you to me

You made that so very clear


Comments:
 
Bluez   Bluez wrote
on 6/12/2009 8:01:05 AM
You have a very vivid imagination to see the angel here, but that's REALLY cool...it was written when I was feeling romantic so I am glad you saw that and took the time to point that out, thanks again for your thoughts and comments. They are much appreciated.

Starlingpoet   Starlingpoet wrote
on 6/12/2009 2:51:27 AM
I saw the line -I say my thanks to the angels of love- and I immediately thought the shape of your poem looked like an angel. The title as the head -if you use your imagination- and then the rest as the body. I love the title too -it is really sweet. You made a love-promise to me -this is my favorite line in your poem, it sounds so romantic! Very cool ; )

Bluez   Bluez wrote
on 3/28/2009 12:42:41 PM
I know this is going to sound funny but, if you hadn't commented on this, I might not have seen the shape the words took as this poem "formed out" for me...it almost looks like a sailing ship to me now. Thank you for your kind words on this poem, it does mean a lot to me and came from deep in my heart.

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Synopsis
Sometimes I am so overwhelmed with emotion and I can't believe how lucky I am, how blessed I am. Between the time I thought of this and was able to write it, it changed though, I was driving at the time, so it really doesn't say enough for me.
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