Driving in LA
  
horns blowin'
traffic is slowin'
driving on the freeways in LA
 
drivin' rush hour
makes my mood sour
who the hell gets the road tax we pay
 
freeway becomes a parking lot
everyone's impatient, tempers are hot
drivin' on the freeway in LA
 
getting out, getting away from it all
find a new escape, go out and have a ball
your own private spot, that everyone else seems to know
 
everyone rushing just to get somewhere
forget about the bills, the worries, the cares
forget about the things we hope we don't show
 
drivin' on the freeway in LA
 
freeway becomes a parking lot
tempers are flarin', somebody's shot
 
drivin' on the freeway in LA
 
drivin' on the freeway in LA
 
drivin' on the freeway in LA

Comments:
 
Bluez   Bluez wrote
on 2/17/2009 9:17:54 AM
No? that's not good news. At least here that part has stopped, or at least doesn't happen as frequently anymore.

debby   debby wrote
on 4/12/2008 5:39:54 PM
Unfortunately, it's not just L.A.

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Synopsis
this was of course, written when this kind of thing (freeway shooting) was more prevalent, but it still isn't safe!
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