A Love So Strong


a man would have to be out of his mind
not to love a woman such as you
and a man would be called much more than blind
to not see the what your kind of love can do

I am not blind, and never was called too dumb
and I saw the love in your arms
I was alone with you, and felt a love so strong it made me numb
and I became a prisoner of your sweet charms

a love so strong so deep and so true
that I felt overwhelmed and fell to my knees
a love that I can only find in the woman that's you
and all I can say is give me lots more please

I once told you that that man would be lucky and I meant it
but in my wildest dreams never thought it would be me
I felt the intensity of your love as you sent it
and now in your arms is where I need to be


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Bluez   Bluez wrote
on 1/12/2010 7:09:34 AM
Thank you Starpoet, your a good friend and I always apreciate your reviews, good or bad, but you always find a way to make them good, or at least make me feel good about what I wrote, what a good friend you are!

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 1/11/2010 12:30:39 AM
Bluez you tell exactly what I feel too. You are truly gifted and your writing shows the depths of your heart. A definite "10"!

Bluez   Bluez wrote
on 3/28/2009 12:37:25 PM
Thank you, means a lot to me when I get reviews like this from friends cause I know you'll tell me what you honestly think.

Bluez   Bluez wrote
on 3/21/2009 7:45:08 PM
Thjank you Penname, very kind of you to share your thoughts on my poem, and it is mine, not written by a woman, though I guess that could be a compliment since women speak from thier soul much easier than men do, I think. I don't take offense Rosa, I apreciate your honesty, though I hope your wrong, I write as it comes to me, and sometimes I don't even like what I write, but I don't mind sharing it and seeing what kind of reaction, good or bad I get, it helps me to understand where I am after reading what I wrote. I hope that makes sense.

penname   penname wrote
on 3/21/2009 5:47:25 PM
ok. this is an awesome poem in its own write, right. form, style, tone - unbelievably awesome. its classy, and real. the only thing i got hung up on while reading it perhaps my own perspective...is the voice in the poem almost seems as if a woman wrote it and given the nature and themes in the poem... i imagine i shouldve sensed a man's voice. it perplexed me a bit and maybe that confusion in my own mind made the poem escape the heartfelt meaning infused in each perfect line. its one of those je ne sais quoi kinda things. i cant explain but i kept thinking a woman was saying these things.

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A poem about the hope and desire in that crazy little thing called love
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