YOU ARE GONE
In a crowded room full of people
I still stand by your side
The doctor said you had to go
We didn't have much time
I took care of your every wish
Even on that final day
The Angel's came down to visit
Then carried you away

Friend's, and other's I have not seen in years
Came by to shake my hand
Their words went right through my mind
They just didn't understand

You lay there oh so still now, as I gently kiss your face
This is our final time to share, before they take you away
So many thing's still left to say
So much we couldn't do
My world will never be the same, Bubba
Since I lost you

I gave up my Brother, My Hero, My Friend
But, we knew we loved each other, until the very end
Thing's we did together, I now must do alone
Until the Angel's visit us again
This time to bring me home

Goodbye my brother 7/7/2010

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StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 8/25/2010 3:41:48 AM
Wonderful ode to your brother. He looks down and smiles. And I like the last verse for it touches the heart. A big "10" from me. Best wishes to you and your family.

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I walked through this life with my Brother by my side..I had to look into his eyes as I watched him slip away. My sorrow is great, in agony I weep for the times we shared to be once again..But, he is gone
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