Wonderful, once again relating to things going on in my life at the present moment. It's so true people are so funny I swear we are the most insensitive of all the animal kingdom...

I love it. Subject, tone, flow are all impecable. I look forward to more. ^_^

Damn, this is good. The poem and the message. Penname says it all!

oh and the title...is great. I love titles that arent explained until the poem is read in its entirety. The poem itself contains irony and metaphor that is inescapably genius

ahhhh... i had to reread it twice. It's eerily profound. I like the tone. It almost sounds cyncial and matter of fact...but has an air of royalty and yet desperation with some hope even after death. The lines about worthy and no one fed me and no legacy...were awesome. It all makes the reader hear the voices from the grave- speak grave truth and teach those left behind of such mockery and shallowness. This poem subject matter suprised me...made me squirm a bit, but that too is the sign of a well written and lasting impact- poem.