My Vows To You
I give to you this wedding band
A promise of love, as I put it on your hand
I offer you, all I can give
To love, and stand beside you, as long as we live
I promise that I will always be true
Try to understand everything you do
As we walk down the isle, into our life
I am so proud that you, are now my wife
I know everyone can see in my eyes
The love I'll have for you, the rest of my life

Things happen for a reason, or that's what they say
I know God had a reason for joining us today
He knew when he brought you into my life
That I needed a good woman, to be my wife
He knew I'd treat you special, and always be kind
That I would always be yours, and you will always be mine




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penname   penname wrote
on 11/24/2008 5:09:29 PM
this is heartfelt, sweet, meaningful. these sentimental poems just get me choked up. maybe without the rhyme, it could go a little deeper. wonderful writing. thanks for sharing your poem- so loving. infuse a little passionate emotion into it and the words may just jump off the page at the reader.

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