FOREVER LOVED
Come to me in the still of the night
Lay your head upon my shoulder
Let me share your sorrow, dry your tears
Lie here in the warm comfort of my arms
Know that you are basking in the glow of my affection

Hear me as I slowly distract you from your sorrow
Hear the words that will deliver you to comforts door
Bring not the misery of yesterday, rather leave it behind
Forever behind closed doors, that you will never again dare to open
Feel the peace within, as I drain your mind of the things that hurt you

Understand that I love you, and want you, to the stars above
I will forever be your friend, your lover, you will be the breath I breathe
Wake with me in the morning, lie still in the early dawn
I will make you feel complete, cherished, forever knowing you are loved

Comments:
 
StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 12/8/2008 1:00:40 AM
We like the way you think here. And what you make us think of. Good one!

penname   penname wrote
on 12/7/2008 7:18:42 PM
almost seems unreal- but readint it makes it so possibly real. Wonderful love poem that is not cliche. I really like the line about draining your mind.... That's pretty gritty and gut feeling. And somehow you speak of sorry in the "misery of yesterday" and tears and sorry, and hurt...but what shines through is that yes, this is a love poem. A really delightful that not only leaves smiles but makes the reader actually think!

BIDDIXGIRL
Poetry
Other
writing BIDDIXGIRL
LIFE IS A RIDE, EITHER OF JOY OR REGRET. WHICH DO YOU CHOOSE? THINK QUICKLY, YOU MAY SOON BE AT A DEAD END!
Bookmark and Share

You must log in to rate.
Rating: 6.0/10

Synopsis
JUST THINKING HOW GREAT IT WOULD BE TO FEEL LIKE THE WORDS OF THIS POEM..WISHING EVERYONE WHO READS THIS WILL HAVE A TRUE LOVE IN THEIR LIFE.
© 2014 WritingRoom.com, LLC. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
WRITING | POETRY WRITING | CREATIVE WRITING | WRITE A BOOK | WRITING CONTESTS | WRITING TIPS