You speak for 95% of the world here. And the other 5% don't have to worry about the BBM. I can relate to this so much for what is the BBM doing to help us? Good one!

I think you've evoked in this poem the feelings of so many 'ordinary people' - the working man or woman at the mercy of 'them'...tired of listening to 'their' goings on...wondering when common sense and justice will prevail. That feeling is all around us in Australia...as I see it is in America. They keep telling us here that there IS no recession...ha bloomin' ha. The way you've written this piece evokes a strong visual image and a strong emotion...thank you for sharing it.

i love the title. almost sounds lyrical- it's great like it is with the seemingly random rhyme, though as I was reading it, the last three lines are powerpacked and though there was a gradual build up of tension and empowerment throughout, the last few lines just seem to sing to the reader- and gives the piece a very well rounded full circle feel along with redemption