Dreams
  

Dreams

 

I dream a dream of beauty and lies

            Her skin so soft; so dark her eyes

                        Radiant as if the ocean itself, for her, hath cried.

The forest sings her name, through bough and rustled leaf

            Through wind and falling rain, such choruses achieved

 

I dream a dream of beauty of passion and loss

            For whom my heart longs

            For whom my heart longs

 

Alone, am I, breathing in again; sorrow consumes my heart

            This tragedy, becoming me, in tearing me apart

I’ve lived to love, but alas, have failed

            No gentle maiden hath, for mine eyes, herself unveiled

I’ve given e’ery day through tear and sorrowed words

            Through taxèd farce, solemn face held in reserve

Her name to know, her love to have, I’ve dreamed a dream

            A whisper, and like a ghost it has passed

                        Like a ghost at end weeping for life to last

            Her hair dancing in the wind

                        For you, for your love, I would give my soul to have.

 

And from my hand this whisper hath gone

            A dream

            A prayer

From beyond the trees she whispers a song

 

The forest, it seems, wishes a darker sky

            Leaves, as snow, fall

So that beneath them she may hide

 

My nightmarish sins, her skin, have devoured

            My beautiful vesper falls, bitterly deflowered

                        And in her shadow I lay, without her light I cower

No staves made to God in dismay

                        The darkness in my soul, over me, seems to tower

 

 

 

 


Comments:
 
poetrydances   poetrydances wrote
on 12/21/2008 12:30:38 AM
Loved this poem- fine wordplay and great images. Excellent write. This as you know has now been listed on www.poetrydances.com as a selected work- We look forward to seeing you as a favorite writer on the Site-! Great job again- PD

Angeleyez   Angeleyez wrote
on 7/8/2008 7:09:19 PM
WOW thats all I have to say....I often feel the way the poem decribes..only about guys instead of girls lol...so i was able to understand it more than i should have......I sooooo wish I wrote that good.......thank you for sharing it :) -Alicia

Destine2bawriter   Destine2bawriter wrote
on 5/12/2008 9:40:53 AM
I find this piece absolutely intriguing, beautiful and fascinating. you have an amazing talent. a gift from God. the way you arrange your words moves my soul. never change your style, because your poetic ways have a way of making the world smile. God bless you

Voice_of_a_Dreamer   Voice_of_a_Dreamer wrote
on 5/6/2008 10:18:38 PM
You make me sick to my stomach. Talent that my hands shall reach for but never grasp.

Pulelehua   Pulelehua wrote
on 5/5/2008 2:40:03 PM
BEAUTIFUL, ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! Such GREAT talent at such a young age, written beyond your years for sure. Thank you!

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And God created the dust and from dust he begot man; we are but ashes and dust scattered by the wind across a vast nothingness we ourselves have created.
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