The Joy of Biscuits and Tea
  Oh, how the chocolatey
Oatily scrumptious temptation!

One biscuit too many
Two many, three many
And all preceeding pie!
How long can I
Retain a relatively slender frame
If every night is the same?

Oh Biscuits and Tea
Come forth unto me
My gluttony
Disables me.

And I bloat!

Comments:
 
Moqui_Takoda   Moqui_Takoda wrote
on 7/26/2008 2:11:51 PM
this is toooo funi oO)) ... props to the first two lines, specifically ... this is precisely how an oatmeal biscuit or cookie with chocolate (gosh, am going to go buy some goodies now thanks to you) :( ... anyhow, yer last four lines and yer final line made me happy as a pancake with a smiley of chocolate whipping cream with raspberries with their real natural juice only thickened with white sugar and arrowroot and and ... your second stanza literally reeks of discipline and and focus ... alrightieeee ! this is just how i need to begin a day which was supposed to be one of light eating and spartan contrivances ... very good and fun this is

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