makes me wanna shout

I put my hand in yours

and I say lead the way

You put your hand in mine

and say we’ll be just fine

I desire your touch

I desire your ways all the time

as the sand falls through the hour glass

I look in your eyes and know time is just ticking by

makes me want to cry

I hold your hand tighter and say please stay with me

just stay with me as time keeps on ticking by

every time your spirit moves

I want to move with you

I have nothing to prove

I just want to move with you

like a serenade a sweet lullaby

makes me want to cry

with you right hand in mine

and your left hand on my face

we move to the music

at your pace

around and around we go

I don’t want to let you go

I want to hold on for all eternity

this place of romance

makes me want to dance

one day soon time will be no more

I will step with you

into that brand new day

where eternity is realized

where mortality will be swallowed

up by life

makes me want to shout


Comments:
 
Annette   Annette wrote
on 3/2/2009 9:04:59 AM
thank you Star...

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 3/2/2009 3:28:56 AM
This poem mesmerized me in it's beauty and imagination. I liked this a lot.

Annette
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