Break the tunnel vission
I open my eyes to a world with people so blind
They stay entrapped within themselves refusing to venture out of their minds
I travel out to the space so vast
But I dont know how long this deep breath will last
So many twisted fates and words that im turning to fire on the inside
I'm left bent and broken as reality and I collide
I try to go back to where I came from but now that i've seen the truth its to late
So I continue on through this forest trying to live this pathetic excuse for a life
My heart beats complex and strong but  I can simply end it with a knife
My existence is dwindling down as I drown in the murky water of this place
But off in the distance I see a beacon of light and now that i've seen it I will never forget its face
I hold my frail life close to me as I descend
I hide myself away in my insignificant being for I have my own small world to mend

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Sojourner   Sojourner wrote
on 1/3/2009 10:02:22 PM
Hey there, I enjoy this poem, I definitely agree with starpoet that the first line of this poem sets the tone for it. You should write more, I would like to comment on it.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 12/16/2008 6:12:56 AM
i like the first line for it sets the tone for the poem. Closed minds and closed hands never did a new idea or friend make. But you let the light of love in and let it brighten your life. It goes a long way to help mend your world.

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