Awakened
Like waking from a thousand year coma there's so much I've missed
Iv been replaced by the new to by father be kissed
I stand back and watch everyone go through their motions
All the while feeling like I could cry oceans
The monster in my head has come back to haunt me
But why now of all times do I wish I could flee
I came to the quiet to search for my wholeness
But it was to busy to care that i've become soulless
I wish I could scream out my hatred for a life wasted
But my words become mangled and the most bitter i've tasted
I could try harder but all this is in vain
Please take my pride out back to be slain
I did my best and kept it together
Till tomorrow when ill again get worn by the weather

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Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 12/15/2008 6:37:33 AM
This is an amazing write. First the line I cry ocean is incredible thoughtful...Take my pride out back to be slain..are you kidding me?..amazing line..and the last line is terrific! You have my attention!!

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