Comment To Lindsay
  Haiku,

Flowers slowly sway
As the unseen wind passes
And spreads their fragrance.

Chris T.
04/21/2008

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Ancient117331   Ancient117331 wrote
on 5/5/2008 8:22:19 AM
Thanks to all that viewed... and any that spoke after. Chris T.

Raven Spirit   Raven Spirit wrote
on 5/5/2008 6:11:28 AM
This has that lovely soft wind that I like to see accompanying Haiku.

AshesofLilith   AshesofLilith wrote
on 5/1/2008 9:28:39 PM
So short and yet the words still portray beauty without measure.

Sojourner   Sojourner wrote
on 4/25/2008 12:00:19 AM
Awesome haiku, I enjoy haiku very much. This is one of the best.

lindsay   lindsay wrote
on 4/21/2008 2:19:54 PM
Smile on my face Appreciation to you Your words are touching

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