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Thanks for the comment! And it's fiction...
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Thank you for taking time to read my story and leave me your comment. That was very nice.---SUKIE
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Thanks for the input. That was my first piece of writing so I'm very much a beginner at this. I'm trying to learn more about how to introduce the characters gradually without making a "glossary" of them. Did the whole "The Gray and "The Realm" make sense to you? I was trying to explain it as best I could, but the more I read it I slowly became a little confused Lol
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Thanks for the comment on "time", glad to see what you thought about it. I was kind of trying to say that sometimes its hard to let go of someone so close and for many its difficult to move on. It was really the fact that louise was in denial sending her to hide away from the realities facing her in life. Also, how only at the end was she able to say " goodbye". The main theme intwinded in this story was the passing of time and insight into other peoples lives. Well sorry if I babbled on for awhile there, thanks again for the comment, Josie Bonnici.
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Hi:) I wrote a poem "Birds" and it is dedicated to you as one of my friends in this website:) Hope you will read it guys. Thanks for being my friends...Have a great day!
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