kt6550   kt6550 wrote
on 6/4/2009 9:17:36 PM
You may want to take a look at "The Bifrost Bridge," by James_Bradley_Clarke. Quite interesting.

kt6550   kt6550 wrote
on 5/30/2009 6:28:35 PM
I very much enjoyed "Twisting Dagger." I especially liked the way you handled Eddie's display of anger when he learned that his family was being threatened. Good job!

kt6550   kt6550 wrote
on 5/16/2009 7:37:48 PM
I really enjoyed the entire story "Once Upon a Weekend." You do a nice job of capturing a twilight zone/outer limits sort of feeling. I would have preferred a bit more imagery, but that is my taste. I think I also would have made the last three chapters longer or added more, to build suspense to the ending. But, once again, that is me. All in all, a thoroughly enjoyable read.

kt6550   kt6550 wrote
on 2/13/2009 5:01:50 AM
"Once Upon a Weekend" is very interesting. Just a thought, but you may want to post as well at The Den of Amateur Writing. There is a chapter function on the site, that would allow you to post all chapters of your book in one session and create a natural breaks in the story. A good tale. Please post the rest.

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