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lauralee   lauralee wrote
on 12/10/2009 12:58:44 AM
thanks for your comment!

Jan   Jan wrote
on 8/16/2009 6:42:41 AM
thanks for accepting my request again.. :)

Jan   Jan wrote
on 8/14/2009 7:46:19 PM
hello..it's jwryt from before..i've created an account and deleted the first one..my new penname now is Jan..hope you'd reaccept my friend request..have a great day!

penmage   penmage wrote
on 8/11/2009 2:15:13 PM
Thank you for the comment. Yes, there will be further conflict with the wings, and the family conflict only gets worse. I am typing up chapter two now and hope to post it soon.

tigercatracing   tigercatracing wrote
on 7/29/2009 4:03:45 AM
In response to your inquiry: my "friend" was killed in a car accident the day after he asked me to marry him, actually about 14 hours after to be exact. So yes it is very sad. Otherwise we wouldn't be apart. Thank you for the lovely comments though I appreciate them :)

Ve   Ve wrote
on 7/20/2009 2:21:08 AM
Because as you said, "You've gone quite a ways in establishing Lilly as an interesting main character" Is she not still interesting or has she headed into the abjuct fantasy side of the story which is not a preference?

Ve   Ve wrote
on 7/20/2009 2:17:17 AM
Hiya thank you for reading my chapters, I respect that fantasy is not your usual choice of reading so I hope you get through the book unscathed. In regards to a comment on a chapter, Ignore Rose, she is but a ripple in the ocean. Think outside the box. Before I delved into the fantastical side of magic I wanted to portray a normal person that could be easier to relate to rather than immediate wow factor of strange folk that can use the elements. I don't know if its effective or not.

phonetics   phonetics wrote
on 7/14/2009 9:29:13 PM
thank you for your feedback it is greatly appreciated

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