Campfire Story

Within the Shadows - Mystery
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Dec 12, 2012 09:19 PM Introduction
Jg9 started with:
     Pitch black. Then, little by little, a tall silhouette starts to draw. Long hair, tight clothes, and that creepy smile...
     That is the one and only dream Louis has had ever since he moved to Portview two years ago. After the tragic day when his parents died, he had to move to his older brother's place in the faraway small town of Portview. 
     Everything seemed to be just a new, rough start for the visionary boy, but the dream started appearing in his night of sleep (which didn't last much to turn into nights of insomnia. At first, it just seemed to be an awkward dream, but in recent weeks, it has become more and more recurrent. "Who is that person?" he wonders every time he wakes up in a pool of cold sweats. 
     Louis had never trusted much his brother, Ike, because they were raised apart, and because Ike had always been a rebel teenager who enjoy being out way after midnight, and because Ike did drugs. Louis, luckily, have never seen Ike as an inspirational figure. That is because their parents tried to mend all the mistakes they made with Ike. /However, in the end, it wasn't all their parents' fault: the older brother is quite a problem.
     Louis had never thought of the dream as much as he is right now. Perhaps it is caused by the part of his mind that still cannot admit the loss of his parents, or maybe is a side effect of being way too close to all the drugs his brother does, or maybe, just maybe, it has to do with that fragment of memory, that specific day Louis cannot remember. No matter how much thought he puts on it, he cannot figure the whole thing out...
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