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Hello dear,
My name is joy, honest and nice looking girl. 24yrs old I am 165 centimeters
tall, chocolate skin, brown eyes sexy balls in search of a man who can be a
true friend and a close confidant, so I checked the website of knowledge and
found your profile very interesting and I like that there is
communication.so please mail me on my e-mail address (joyteamah@ymail.com) and
lets get to know each other better. is a beautiful, beautiful, love filled the weeks ahead, as the
expect your mail remember age and distance should not be an obstacle in the search for
true friendship, should not restrict us to discover the beauty that is in
ok between us, and I send you my picture and tell you more about myself as
I just e-mail from you thanks.Kiss
joy
E-mail..........(joyteamah@ymail.com)
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I invite you to join the new group called Fiction Novelist. It will be interesting.
Ray
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Hello,Ifound your story very interesting but one thing that you should keep in mind is simple,
children have very good imaginations and short attention spans so you don't need to be quite
as descriptive and words that they will simply understand to help them see the story and
characters is much more effective . your great, just pass the story by your daughters or some other girls they will let you know with their reactions then you will know exactly what to do.
Good Luck,Jewel
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I have been delighted to read your work Jim, and rated it a ten as far as I have read to this point. Very interesting story and your imagination and talent shows through it all, what a wonderful thing to do for your daughters.
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Hi Jim!
I'd be happy to read your cover letter draft. Those are tricky, and it's always helpful to have a fresh eye to find things that can be improved or added. Is it on your page?
All the best,
-Kayla
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